very nice poem. So sad!

very nice rhyming. Cool view of Guardians, they need each other to function fully.

all powerful...yet...so powerless.

brilliant. update soon.

Nakago and Soi!! its obvious!! XD good imagery by the way =0

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AH! *dies* I LOVED IT! i swear, i thought i was reading something out of a fairy tale or folk stories book! and now that i think about it, YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE ONE! you've gotta let me know if you ever write a poetry book or a story book or ANY book...you just HAVE to! i swear, i'll be the first to buy it!! really!!

Ashitare!

Easy! Miboshi!

Yui?

Tomo?

huh? Hotohori's son?

Hotohori! ^.^

Nakago's thoughts about Soi? Is the boy-king Hotohori?

*tears* for some reason i've always thought that Nuriko's background is the saddest...his death too...*sniff*

*question marks* who should this be?

Suboshi and Amiboshi! (mainly suboshi) XD