i liked the story better with the bit you added on...Good Job!

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thats so sad, and beatifully written. poor oliver. its good that katie stood by him though. good story!
LAdy Arre

Aw, so sad! Pretty good, though. I did like your bit, you should have made it part of the story. I mean, it is... yeah. Good job!

aw!

Aww, that was really moving. Well written! I liked the ending, with the fact they were still together and happy! Will be keeping a look out for more of your work!

oh my gosh! that was completely awesome, if a little sad, lol. you should TOTALLY go past the oneshot thing and go into a story! that would be great! and you could add things from before the deatheaters and stuff, like when they graduated or came to be together! i will be a frequent reader and reviewer. lol. :D awesome job!