Great fic...more please;o)

Wow...I could atcually feel all the tension^^ And Shin was really great in it ^^ I love this one shot ^^ Amazing job!

I like how the are constantly try to goat the other person into doing what they want, but that Shin is the one that actually wins. Yankumi didn't even have a fighting chance it seems.

hahhaha! that was nice! and Sawada was really scary there, huh! waa! kumikoxshin rocks!!

that was really good...
excellent narration and the description are really precise...
i just hope there's more chapters or any sequel...

anyways...good job!

ZOMG THIS IS FAB. SUPERB plot and ending!

This was so--so--so god! I really love Shinkumi goodness!

omg that was so hot! xD *favorites*

omb! [oh my bob]
this story is sexy!
but why did they stop!
:) gosh i'm so perverted...

:) great job!

coolness, I love how you changed the episode. I feel bad that he got slapped but at least she didn't break any of his limbs.

Ujah!
That was... interesting :P

OMG (O_O)
that was so good... I want more!

I really enjoyed this, and I feel you captured the characters rather well. Thank you for writing it.

Amazing. :D

this has been under my personal favs and i decided to add it to my ff act's. still one of my all time favs!