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| Once Upon A Twilight 2007-11-23 ch 13, | abuseOHMG. that was AHMAZING. it should tell you something that i'm utterly exhausted and it's 2 a.m. & i STILL hung on to read this. lololol i'm gonna regret it in the morning but right now it doesn't matter at all because i totally LOVED your fic. annabel is such a fabulous character, & i love how you made everything so realistic! her actions were always true to her personality, & you showed a gradual, believable change over time. i just completely adore this fic! & you deff. depicted horatio PERFECTLY =) |
| Mahou Senshi Koinu-chan 2007-09-23 ch 13, | abuseAww! Cute! ^_^ I wish there was a sequel! Or is there? It feels like the story should go on! ^_^ Good work! Especially on keeping Horatio in personality! |
| Mahou Senshi Koinu-chan 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseGood so far! You kept them in personality really well! (Something I have a really hard time doing). I'm going to read more now! ^_^ |
| jeffandjimmieschick 2006-06-17 ch 13, | abuseTHAT'S IT? THAT CAN'T BE IT! IF IT'S IT U MUST RITE A SEQUEL! PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE! U CANNOT LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT! THAT IS SO EVIL! PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL! UR SUCH A GOOD WRITER, U CAN'T END H AND ANNABEL HERE! |
| BevG 2006-06-15 ch 13, | abuseFantastic story, great characters. Please do a sequal, I want to find out what happens between Horatio and Annabel. Kind regards |
| Quiz 2006-06-14 ch 13, anon. | abuseGo, Sequel, GO! GO, GO, GO! |
| TenFour 2006-06-14 ch 13, | abuseArgh, how did you stop there?? Great end chapter, but if there is not a sequel I will be lost...I need more!! Actually I'd quite like to meet the six uncles!! Thanks for this story it was absolutely great, I've loved getting to know the characters in your world but I really need more, you left me hanging. |
| Aphina 2006-06-14 ch 13, | abuseSEQUEL NOW! lol (ahem)ANyway i loved this I wnat more ANnie! The char is much fun and so real its untrue. I demand more! |
| Quiz 2006-06-13 ch 12, anon. | abuseAfter 11 and 12: MORE, MORE, MORE! |
| TenFour 2006-06-13 ch 12, | abuseAh yes thank you, you brought a smile to my face!! Your characterisations are excellent, once they have been set up you are very consistent with them, I really feel like I know the characters and love to see them interacting. The moments between them are very subtle and allows for great imagination, a really important thing for me as a reader of the story! As always looking forward to more!! |
| TenFour 2006-06-12 ch 11, | abuseOh good to see you back, missed my daily fix!! I'm intrigued as to why dancing could be so bad, and what is getting Annie all hot and bothered about it?? Looking forward to finding out! |
| TenFour 2006-06-08 ch 10, | abuseYou're keeping me hanging on for this dinner aren't you! Oh yeah angsty is the word but that made it a really good chapter, good development of Annie's story, it was an excellent balance of substance and the little H and Annie moments that keep me going, loved the end it was very sweet and gentle! |
| TenFour 2006-06-07 ch 9, | abuseArgh, they rain checked the date! Nice to see Ro back, maybe she can drum a bit of sense into our girl, surely Horatio is around for a nice catch up dinner! Loved the line about stalking too... |
| TenFour 2006-06-06 ch 8, | abuseOh scarey looks like H is stalking Annie!! Great as always I looking forward to this date, and I love the line about being on the same network! Thanks for updating so promptly, I can't wait to get home from work these days! |
| TenFour 2006-06-05 ch 7, | abuseAw this was incredibly sweet, my favourite chapter so far, I just love the interaction and the vunerability that Annabel shows and Horatio's gentleness with her is lovely. |