sequel!

I love this story! This story again shows how much heart and emotion you're able to put into your writing and that's definitely VERY GOOD.

Maybe you can write a new Odyssey 5 story;) You really seem to be able to switch into the characters.

So I like this story very much!

omg! this was the best written oddysey 5 fic ever! it was actually like watching an episode of oddsey 5 haha. Poor Neil, he was my fave character! I have one question though. How come in Kellys future Neil died and knew about the mission but in Neill's furture he was perfectly fine? In Neils future he lived long enough that they got married but in Kellys future he died right after they got engaged. Can you explain that plz i'm so confused lol.

Poor Neil, it must have been very hard on him. And still must be his life's very complicated.

Great story, very sweet and also sometimes sad story, please continue to write Odyssey 5 fanfiction.

Mary Sue? :-_-:

Great fic. I had almost given up hope of anyone writing another odyssey 5 fic and was overjoyed to find your story. I look forward to the next chapter. Again, awesome story.

The story is well worth any wait - I enjoy each new chapter.

Mark comes into the picture - things will certainly get even more intersting/complicated to the family...Poor Marc doesn't even begin to realise everything what's going on.

I have a feeling things will get even more difficult between him and his father when he finds out some things..

Great story, as always. Keep on the good work.

Good first hapter..I'm intrigued. There is not a lot of Odyssey 5 fanfic out there. I was highly disappointed when it was cancelled.

Anyhoo, I'll keep reading.

And it's barely noticeable by your writing that English is not your first language, so you are doing very well.

Another good chapter. I love how you portrated Chuck, how he still doesn't completely believe that it happened - it makes more sense this way. Nice outburst on Kelly's part, at least Neil has her to stand up for him.

Really good. I loved how Neil's reactions were descibed. Poor Neil... Though, there's is NO ignoring the true any more... Guess Chuck finally realised what they did to their son.

Two long chapters are enough of a reward for the wait.

Yeah I liked this chapter. Though you made me hate paige enough to want her alive just so she can face what she did and suffer for it. What a horrible thing to do to a child.

What's going on with Neil's wife? Doesn she aware of any of this?

That was really good chapter. Lots of intersting revelations... Promise for good plots. Can't wait for more.

Silwyna,

This is excellent. I am so happy you're writing this-there isn't that much O5 fic out there to begin with and I've really wanted to see one that touches on the strained Neil/Chuck dynamic. You have a lot of really interesting things going on within this story. One suggestion-perhaps you can flash to a scene of Neil's actual conversation with Kurt that night, so it doesn't seem like a reference the reader has missed out on? It would be a fascinating moment as well, Neil getting drunk and the revelation-maybe you had planned that, I don't know. But it would certainly be pivotal to the story if you included that.

I really am a fan and keep checking back for more! Hurry!