hey

wow... this is a great story
great storyline keep it up!!

oh can you please tell me if there are any ships ?? if so wat r they?? just wanna noe to clear up some of my confusion...

May your Hand forever keep writing
Kitsune ash

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

I can't wait for whatever you have after this.
The snake at the fireplace, what was it? A Runespoor?
Lady Blackbird is Milady Merlin, no?

I liked it! Kind of a weird spot to end though... but I can't wait for the next one!

Very cool am realy injoying it keep up the good work.

love it and can't wait for more

great story! I want Harry to find his granfather tho. oh well. keep up the great work!

I love your story update soon!

another great chapter. i hope harry and bane can go back together without and drama. neither is anywhere near as cool apart as they are together. i hope you update really really soon! keep 'em comming!!

>The dragon is a homoeothermic reptile.

I can't find anything that even refers to 'homoeothermic'. Maybe exothermic (means it gives off heat)? But reptile? The definition itself says a reptile is cold-blooded, so your definition is something of a contradiction. However, I'm hard pressed to find another word that might fit. But scientists now think that dinosaurs were mostly warm-blooded.

Perhaps 'exothermic reptilian-appearing beast (or being)'?

good story.

Awesome story. While some of it is a little disjointed and the random author notes disrupt the flow, this is one of the most unique HP stories I've read and hope the five months of down time does not mean the author has abandoned the story.

Everything from Harry heritage and how he was educated to Riddle/Voldemort is very different. You can feel his frustrations at the world and his instincts pulling him in different direction. The only really annoying part is the lack of depth on the draconian world and why they are as they are--why their council hates Harry--and why his only living ancestor won't help him. Very confusing/frustrating, even if it is suppose to be part of the mystery.

love the story, really enjoy the character lola. glad that she wasnt just a one time show. look forward to the next chapter

Very interesting story you've written here. I like how the pack mentality is so strong in the Draconians. Leads to a lot of confrontations that really give the story a boost.

Interested in seeing how this one develops. Definitely a lot of possibilities for this story.

Some things that I'd like see addressed soon would be the Draconian prophecy concerning Harry, Draco's possible mate, and a bit more info on the Pit and Tom's interaction with it. I know you'll be addressing these when they fit into YOUR story line, but these are just the main things that I'm curious about.

As for critiques, spelling and grammar wise I have no complaints. Very nice job on the editing on your part along with any beta's you have. You're also a very talented writer, well above the average fan fiction authors out there.

I only have one real complaint, and to be completely honest it's not really a complaint at all. But for me personally, it seems that the story's flow is a bit off. There are parts where it just seems as it hits a bump in the road before getting back on track. I'm not sure exactly what makes me feel this way either.(I know not much help am I) But like I said, not really a complaint, just something that kind of stuck in my head. Regardless of my little quirk, I still found this to be a very enjoyable fic that I'll keep track off.

Great job and thanks for the effort so far.

Ah, yes. Now the story is starting to get rolling. I'm looking forward to more.