I love that last part!! Wonderful writing!

I know that this is an older story, but I loved it! I love hurt!Dean and worried!Sam, especially when they're teenagers!

I also loved the last line. So cute and so in character for the teenchesters :).

Loved it! It's a very good story. Keep up the good work!

aw that was really good. i really liked the ending too. SO sweet

aww...this was great, i really enjoyed it!

NYAH!! That was so beautiful!! The beginning the climax and the end.. all great with just the right amount of action and mush.. aw.. to cute..

aww uber angsty fluffy fluff! i loved it!
XsarahX
kudos!

Oh, what a wonderful story! I'm so glad I found it. I love the way you described Dean's fall into the icy water, Sam's panic and final relief when John arrives, and the gentle affection at the end. It has all the elements I just love about the series! Great job!

aww.. great fic. really enjoyed it.

I was re-reading your fics.. *grins* (as I'm going into withdrawal from waiting for the next chapter of "Waking Hour") and I realized that I hadn't reviewed this.

Dean chuckled, squirming his way down in the bed. Sam rolled over and helped him move the pillows into a more comfortable position so his brother could get some sleep. “So one minute you want me to go away and the next you want to sleep with me?”

Sam sucked in a breath. He sat up and looked down at his brother, who looked confused as to why Sam suddenly looked so upset. “Sammy?”

“I didn’t mean it,” Sam blurted.


Ah, I love your writing, Penny. It goes from humor to intense with such skill and ease... it's just beautiful.

Aww I love the pre-show moments like these when the Winchester family is still together. And of course, Dean angst is always appreciated. ;D

-Merrie

AW! CUTENESS! Great fic! I loved it!

*sigh*

I love your cranky Sammy, rings so true ;-) And another hurt!Dean on a hunt, you write it so clear and sharp, I felt like freezing myself while reading.

Love that you had John in it, for once trying to be a father and not failing his kids miserably. Altough the task of sneaking around in the snow was terrible already, so glad he was there to help little Sammy.

I love it! The part about the fart joke at the beginning, and then at the very end Dean finally caves in. I love a good brotherly love story! lol. Great job!!

You create such believable interactions between the brothers in all of your stories and this one is no different. It played out in my mind as if it were on screen. And I absolutely LOVED the ending. Honestly, you couldn't have chosen a better way to wrap things up!