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| Hippopotomonstrosesquippeda... 2007-09-05 ch 3, | abusenot gonna say anything |
| Gefion 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuseI know what snow in japanese means it's 'yuki. And your way to write is okay. I'll keep on reading. |
| Puppyeye1 2006-08-24 ch 3, | abuseok |
| lalalalki 2006-07-15 ch 2, | abuseu want more review here it is i love the story why did sakura leave that leaf town dunno the name |
| InsaneDarkness18 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseum sure you can write like her(or was it him?) but you sentences are squished together and don't make a lot of sense but her/or his sometimes doesnt make sense either basically you did okay |
| SweetAssassin 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseUpdate Update Update! If you haven't gotten the message yet... UPDATE! This is really really really good so far... but make your chappies longer please! |