Reviews for The Art of Writing a DRoP Fic

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SunnyGoesNorth 2008-05-24 ch 5,	abusevery funny :-) loved the spelling mistakes in the begining, last chaper really made me laugh! green riders considering becaming stright!
BloodyHellRose 2008-04-01 ch 5,	abusesnorts Head...hurts...KILL MARJORY! BURNBURNBURN! BR: That was too incorrect-and mentally scarring- for words. SO I'll shut up and pass this back to BHR. BHR: I can't help but feel sorry for Pamela, even if she was idiotic enough to agree to beta a Sue-fic. Goodbye. -BloodyHellRose The Mad Vampiress
BloodyHellRose 2008-04-01 ch 4,	abuseWell. Here she is, the amazing flamer. BR: What kind of name is Hotteth for a dragon? Also, Pern takes place in the future, so their language is an evolved form of ours. Not old-english. Wouldn't M'kyui, as a bronze dragonrider, be used to between by then? How inferior is this Weyr? Herness. What a descriptive word. The image of her amazing qualities has appeared in my mind, crystal-clear because of your incredible descriptive qualities. (Note sarcasm, in case the Suethor is too stupid to figure out I wasn't being sincere.) If there are patatoes on Pern, they're called something else. Or I've just missed them, which is possible, I supose. And actually, Ramoth just happens to be the biggest dragon on Pern in her time period- technically, there could be a bigger dragon, though it is extremely unlikely in previous Intervals/Passes. What kind of name is that for a dragon, anyway? And I repeat, you can't kill a vampire with a chainsaw. BHR: Well, she had a lot to say. And I have nothing else. -BloodyHellRose The Mad Vampiress
BloodyHellRose 2008-04-01 ch 3,	abuseHilarious. I can't resist the temptation to let my fanged alter-ego loose on the "story", so... BR: Why is this written in present-tense? You do realize how annoying that is for readers? And is Alai an albino, or part albino? Because she does have silver hair and pale skin. Albinos have red eyes, though... "really smooth, clear, rich, beautiful things." The only thing I can think of that fits this is a window. [pause] A window carved of diamonds and adorned with precious stones. snickers at mental image How do you pronounce M'kyui, anyway? Because I can't tell. Also, I think Akos patented the Booming Voice. And people who steal from him get thrown through second-story windows. I doubt he reads fanfiction, though, so you're probably safe. Unfortunately. And you can't kill a vampire with a chain saw. You can try, but you'll fail BHR Again: Wow, that was a long rant. She usually doesn't go on for quite that long... BR: That was the first time you let me rant to someone else in forever. Shut up. BHR: No, you shut up. Anyway, please update this story. I think I'll do reviews of the other chapters of The Most Beautiful of Them All. Or BR will. She's better at flames anyway. -BloodyHellRose The Mad Vampiress
Morgan5318 2008-01-06 ch 5,	abuseSo, so painful, but so, so funny! I didn't know whether to laugh or cry, but I couldn't stop reading it. Wonderful satire.
kakadumittens 2007-11-09 ch 5,	abuseMwahahaha I am seriously "lmaoing" right now. Poor Marjory - some people just don't understand they should keep their thoughts to themselves!! XD Great Story! xox the mit
Star Wars nut 2007-09-06 ch 5, anon.	abuseThis is directed toward Marjory and her pethitic excuse for a story. Ahem... First I just want to say that I am a Mary Sue enthustiast. I study Mary Sues, so I know what I'm talking about. Your character is the most stereotypical, sap-oozing, lame Sue I have ever seen. And again, I'm a Sue enthuisast, so that's saying something. If I was your beta, I would have killed myself by now. Or you. Or your character.
RNS Intrepidwriter 2007-05-19 ch 5,	abusewow!! i don't know how anyone could stand this story, let alone type it! i know my own story's not great, but the two stories that Marjory posted takes first for being the worst, most eye burning stories ever written. if Marjory was a real writer on and had posted those stories, i probably would've chewed her up real good before thinking about reporting the. here's what i would've said about her first story: first of all, i don't think queens even go out on search. also, you NEED to learn how to use grammer. half the time that use names, they aren't capitolized. same thing goes for quotation marks. Also, i can't even pronounce the names of the queens. please learn to proofread your story before posting. also, get a beta, but not me. well, keep up the interesting story, eminempern. can't wait for more to come.
XIII Dragon 2007-04-02 ch 5,	abuseThe report buttom is looking very tempting right now. Are you sure we can't report some because of just how sue-ish characters are. I don't know how loong I can stand this.
XIII Dragon 2007-04-02 ch 4,	abuseEyes may bleed? EYES MAY BLEED? Are you sure you don't eyes may fall out, be burned in front of your eyes and devoured by a fire lizard? That would describe the sensation I'm feeling even if it was only about 0.01% I don't think there is a word inventited that decries how much I was in.
XIII Dragon 2007-04-02 ch 3,	abuseSome one please shot me now. I should have listened to your warning and run screaming while I had the chance. For once I am actually afraid to read on. I really did not think it would be this... this... this much of a Mary Sue.
Dragon Dancer 2007-03-25 ch 5, anon.	abuserolls on floor laughing Oh this is hilarious! Perfect to read after a bad day! ;) I don't know why I've never read it before... Anyway, I'd applaud Pamela for being so patient, I would have slaughtered Majory by now. As for 'Majory's stories,' despite the fact they aren't real they still made me want to spork my eyes out, but I won't hold it against you. winks One thing I seriously wanted to maim her for was 'whatshisface' having 'amber' eyes...gr! No one on Pern is to have amber eyes apart from F'lar! shakes fist Marjory is possibly everything I could hate about an author, but unfortunately there are some like her... makes face Again, great story. I love it and look forward to more. ;) Dragon Dancer
SwiftShadow 2007-03-23 ch 5,	abusePoor Beta... We should attack Marjory with dragons. Write them into the story in a horrible cliché, and have them flame Marjory amazingly without firestone. -nods- Or we could just avoid evil clichés and attack with nerf bats? You can just ignore most of that... After trying to decipher the horrible spelling and grammar, I had to rant. I can't even type like that! I don't know really how I managed to read the whole thing in one sitting... How that one character that you inserted, Karen I think her name was?, managed to get hooked on The Most Beautiful Of Them All, I have absolutely no clue. Although, getting back to what I said before, you could add in a horrible deviation from the book (that Marjory would write, of course. We can't have any of the good authors messing up, can we?) and have whatever the main character's dragon's name (I don't want to go back and look. Forgive me.) is, suddenly flame thread, completely ignoring the fact that 1)Gold dragons don't even use firestone and 2)Dragon need firestone to flame. I'm not quite sure if that is clichéd or not... I haven't read enough Fics in this section to know. So, anyway, I'll be watching for the next chapter. The 'plot' (or in some cases as it seems, lack of it) is kinda funny... --SwiftShadow
truegold-dragonstar 2007-03-23 ch 5,	abuseOuch. That's actually painful. I vote for Pamela to slaughter Marjory with the girl's own chainsaw. SOON, please. I think maybe you need to start developing an actual plot for Pamela and Marjory. Maybe you are, and it's just not obvious yet. I will read your updates, but only if I'm not too depressed before I start... t-d
TheDreamerLady 2007-03-21 ch 5,	abuseDude... don't bring up the whole computer withdrawl. I get it every summer when I'm stuck in the middle of nowhere with old people who watch TV all day. If you think Marjory's bad, just think of how godawful commericals are to those of us who aren't used to how dumb they can be. Bleh. BUT ANYWAY! The Most Beautiful of them all was ALMOST legible. And AMAZING of course... amanda and Lanco(the duck)

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