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Reviews For: Xander, meet Cruelty

swordbunny4486
2008-08-11
ch 1,
abusecool!
snowecat
2007-10-26
ch 1,
abuseSweet. A little short, but it could really go somewhere. Were there others with similar costumes I wonder? I think if Buffy had the armor, she'd be Wildfire. It's sort of the unoffical leader and she has some personality traits with Ryo. Willow would be Strata or Torrent. Not sure about the other guys tho.
Bishop T
2007-09-09
ch 1,
abuseThis was totally cool!! I know very little about Anubis. I've only heard a little about him but I totally dig how you blended the it with Buffy! I hope you write more.

Terry
Doc4
2006-12-16
ch 1,
abuseNot knowing a whole lot about Ronin Warriors, this is kinda cool. What sort of damage can Anubis do? Hm...
Ordinaryguy2
2006-11-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseI've never seen the Ronin Warriors but I've definetly seen the Buffy episode. I think you should try redoing it and building on the characters and events. I know it sounds like work but after you are in it a little bit it can become fun. I do it all the time. Actually first I write it out on napkins as I'm running around, later I write the gist of everything on a tablet of paper, then, when I finally get time, I sit in front of the computer and type it all in, adding lots of stuff. Then going back and changing things all over again. Yeah, it's a lot of work, but I'm happier with it.
The Loneliest One
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abusenice neds an update tho
Fastwalker
2006-09-04
ch 1,
abuseI think this is the first time I've ever reviewed your work. Enjoyed this one very much. Would like to see more.
Psi Kat
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuse:) That's definately an interesting twist to that episode. Good story.
Bobboky
2006-06-13
ch 1,
abusenice
Rogue Ronin
2006-06-01
ch 1,
abusehey! not too bad...ya got the characters down very well...intereting crossover!
FairyQilan
2006-06-01
ch 1,
abuseNice.
Q
2006-05-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseI LOVE you...That's all that needs to be said. :)
Ant Crown
2006-05-31
ch 1,
abusePlease more.
Xander must scare crap out of Spike again.
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