Fantastic :D I love it...thanks for posting!

Great work!
The way you used words and depicted character really made this awesome to read. I like the little poem at the end, how it ties it all in.

Beautiful~ To me, this story is one of the most in character fics I've seen of these two. VERY nice job.

You are awesome, this perfectly describes what I think Matt's motivation is, and his character. Just spectacular. *sleepy grin*

*favorites* cause this is about the best description of Matt I've ever seen. *more sleepy grinning*

Very interesting insight in Matt's thoughts. And the ending was very beautiful.

I love it! The end sentance has to be my favorite in the whole fanfiction. Keep it up!

Once again, lovely. I love your writing. And I think you have pictured Mello perfectly here.

u really know how to write Matt x Mello fics!keep up the good work!

I love this line and it's true too, "Mello’s about twice as unpredictable as a teenage girl overflowing with hormones, and too damn smart for his own good." Two distinct qualities that composes Mello in the inside.

And this sounds like Matt, I really could imagine him with this, Matt-style, "And really, it’s not like they have anything better to do."

The poem at the end, beautiful.

I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing!