That was so funny. So was it Thor or Loki who had to dress up that was little bit hard to read. That was good fanfic you should make more fanfics like this one for Mystical Detective Loki Ragnarok.

It's pretty funny.

Your fic was amusing, and we seriously need more Narugami oriented fics. I liked too how you worked in the old Norse myth of when Thor had to dress up as Freja. However it was difficult to read at times because of some of the sentence and paragraph structure. Have you ever considered getting a friend to be a beta reader? They're great tools for fanfiction writing because they notice things you didn't see yourself, and more.