the characterizations were perfect! this pair is so adorable

Awww cute! And death note! Ahh! Do a crossover! I want l with kitty ears! Good job..

i loved it 3

Apples for Ryuk!

this was great; so kawaii.

thanks for writing!

Rose xx

o-o

OMG I LOVE YOU XD

*runs around screaming, doing the yaoi dance XD*

this was so god and omfg. D:

for your first loveless fic, the characters were PERFECT! LIKE WOW.

OMG LOL. im dying over here T_T

loved it.

this was good, how old is ritsuka in this one?

FEED THE ADDICTION! lol, cute! 3 I like it! LEMON! w I'm gonna shut up now!

Wow. You write Loveless and Death Note, too? Is there anything you CAN'T do? And geez, it's all amazing! This is the best SoubixRitsuka non-sex fic I've read thus far. You, my friend, are a master of words.

Wow! I enjoyed this every bit as much as your Fruits Basket ones.

First of all, love the Death Note referance at the end, lol. I love Death Note. And I love this fanfic, you did an excellent job. I was surprised that it's your first Loveless fanfic, Ritsuka and Soubi are prefectly in character! . A lot of writers just can't seem to get them right, but I have no complaints here. Great job, keep it up please!

I think it was excellent!

Not bad. In fact, I thought it was pretty cute. Ritsuka's innocence was portrayed cutely and even during the handjob. Very nice.

Hah, this good. Hot but cute at the same time. Nice. _

Eep! Xenia was right, Lily, my dear, you are an amazing yaoi writer. I felt dirty just reading it. Graphic and intensely realistic. I absolutely love this story!

this was very cute. the characters were right on, the lime was yummy, the dialogue was spot on i think, and ritsuka's reacion/worry at the end was funny/cute. good job