I still enjoy how this story is going so far. However what's with the potty mouth all of a sudden?

I know that Kodi's been through some rough times in Africa, but saying things like "hellhole" and such seems way out of character for him. Remember just because you can have swearing in your story doesn't mean you should.

In final words: like the story, keep it up, and just watch the language. Also if you could read one of my stories and review one that would be nice too. Bye.

Awsome story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work! :3

Just reviewing to let you know tht I reallt enjoy this story and I can't wait for the next time you update.

Beautiful story been following it all the way through can't wait for the rest!

This is going very well. I can't wait to find out what will happened next. Please update.

It's Okay

My first review so I don't know how this should go..*shrugs* Ok Great story so far! I hope Kodi finds something to do while he's stuck in a cave with bruised ribs! I wish there was a movie about Balto and Simba meeting! Keep writing! Can't wait for more!

this is really good, but i think that you used their names a little to much when you could have used pronouns. other wise, its really good! it really caught my interest.

So does that also mean that Kovu will not really be in your story as well? Mufasa, the spirit ball- said that man was going to come into the pride lands. When is that going to happen?

NO! NO KOVU! he is my fav char :( you should have had him meet the outsiders :(

by the way its "lets go" not "let goes" and Rafiki is a baboon not a mandrill

just 2 little things...

1) Zira's name is spelled "Zira" not "Ziera"

2) you keep switching between past and present you know like if at one point you said "Kiara gasps" and then the next "they continued walking"

im not trying to be mean just giving constructive criticism please reply back and tell me if i was being to mean about this please? anyways I know how to spell the names of the lion king characters because I am a lion king nut...i actually made a lion king quiz show fic lol!

i love it plz update soon

this was a great chapter and i hope kodi gets to his dad soon. keep up the good work and update your laptop soon. lol. -redd

the story is absilutly awsome! I can't wait to see what happens next! keep up the good work and good luck with gatting a new laptop!