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azir
2007-08-14
ch 1, anon.
abuse--mariz to, lablab ngttype.=)--

nice. sino inspiration n2?=)

un ln.

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lablab hir.

mariz der.

oist!

lam m b pnlit co ln c mariz...

bwahahah!

peace.=)

muahugz!
xXKoutaValentineXx
2007-07-12
ch 1,
abuseOK... so Sakura is sick? Wow thats depressing... WTF is wrong with her?! Make her healthy! Or I will come to your house and.. wait isnt that illigal? Nevermind, you get off easy for now...
HannahSakura.Pinoy
2007-03-27
ch 1,
abuseNice. Sad. Haha! Bye!
pink22sakura
2006-10-27
ch 1,
abuseKawaii! :)
Bombsauce
2006-09-23
ch 1,
abuse*cys* wah! it was WAY too sad...but oddly i luved it.
XoXSetsunaXoX
2006-06-18
ch 1,
abuseWow.. Amazing.. I enjoied it alot...keep it up!! :)
Yadda Blah
2006-06-07
ch 1,
abuseAWESOMENESS! ON MY FAVS! MEEP!
fuu-nk
2006-06-04
ch 1,
abuseI wanna cry!

It so angsty! And added the PLUS factor that I'm playing the song "You & I" by Martin Nieverra... huhuhuhu... T.T

And Sasuke-kun's so so... It's like he has forever filled with hopes...

and here goes the song again!

You and I...we have moments left to share...
we can make it anyway...
you and I...we belong in each other's arms
there can be no other love
now I know that we can have it all...forever!

huhuhu...And yatta!...I'm feeling a plot entering my mind... looks like a songfic comes in!

Yay! Please do read my stories...ehehe..
I hope you'll like it too... 'coz I really love yours!

^.^ c",) ƒùù-chan!
Nikki m.
aPpLecHeRrY
2006-05-31
ch 1,
abuseLangya! Bat mo tinanggal?!

Nwei...

bsahin mo ule ung 2nd line.
4th line, bkt which? tao c saku noh!
parang umikli...

nyaha!! cute prn nman eh!! mukhang nagmature...

wha?! mature?! tama b un?!

^_^ nga pla, d co prn tapos fafa cologne. sowee!!
^____^ who turned T_____T
2006-05-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseuwa.. that was so sad.. ><

but it was beautiful! i love the angst! XD
deity of death1
2006-05-31
ch 1,
abuseWaii... Cute. ;_; I really like the last four lines. ^_^

You commented on one of my oneshots, so I thought it'd only be fair if I returned the favor. :]

Very well written. You're Filipino too, ne? XD I love your profile, especially the jokes near the end. *cough*

Anyways, you did great!! Keep it up, 'kay? ^_^
paparazzi girL
2006-05-31
ch 1, anon.
abusewaii!
ths is SO cute! *shrieks* love it!
melukia
2006-05-30
ch 1,
abusehi tisha! zzup?? hahaha! i like it. prang inspired ata by real life... but it's something that a lot of people can relate too... it's really sad... pero super nakakatouch ung story:)

hope to hear from ya soon!

-ate memeü
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