Its good. You did a nice job recreating the mood of Blue Sub 6.

Very nice for a short [and I do mean SHORT!] story. Let's see what you can come up with for a full-fledged series. I'll be looking forward to it.

Ultimate. That was the first and best thing that I have ever read. I've seen most of the movie exept for the end and I've gotta tell ya, this aand that movie both rock!

aight, that was some writing

Sweet. That's all I can say: sweet. (But it's got just enough meaning and thought to keep it from giving me cavities.)Keep it up!

Not bad at all for a first!

Very good! You write very well! Personally, I think it's difficult to write about feelings and put this in way I imagined. But you handled this very well!

I love it!

That was good! I liked it. This is the first Blue Sub. 6 fic I've read here, I'm glad I chose this one. -Assassin Lady Darkness

I thought it was very good ) One of the better Blue Sub 6 I've read.

Hey alot of people love to do Hayami and muteo fics,but in my mind I only see there relationship as friendship and fascination. I definitely think that the love is between hayami and kino.

Love it! That's one great fic! but... where's the plot! i need a plot... PLEASE WRITE MORE! MORE MORE MORE! I LOVE IT!

That was good for the first time.

I love this. I think Hayami ans kino make te cutest couple. This is really good. I love it!

Aww...love this ficcy! Write a sequel (give puppy eyez and lip), C'mon, you've got the talent, the brains, the feedback...Sequel! Gosh, my Blue Sub 6 fic sucked...consider yourself TALENTED! ;) BTW, HayamixKino all the way!