do you plan to continue or update this story?

Please can you finish the story, I loved it!

GAH, so cute!

Wow, you had better continue! I am really enjoying this!

this is really good you should update it soon!

I'm not sure what your experience is with police, but the ones I'm used to seeing don't work as well as yours do. Honestly, the police could assume her partner died from his injuries just as well as he could have been strangled. Aside from it being a (more or less) quiet way to kill someone, it's also very untraceable and looks almost natural. They'd have to perform an autopsy first.

Anyhow, there's also monitors on patient health, and easy to find buttons to press in the event that someone's trying to kill you. They summon police, medics, and doctors in a hurry.

Technicalities aside, good work.

For some reason I didn't get the alert that you'd updated. No matter because I found it anyway. :0)

Can't wait for the action to start...

i love it keep writing

well, im stil waiting for more action

Make Logan and Annica fall in love with eachother in the end...he needs to get over Jean and Annica can do that! Love it keep it up!

So yeah, i read the summary and was intrigued enough to read...and i like it so far! Of course, i have a biased opinion on pairings in stories and i think that Logan should ALWAYS get the girl, but that's just me...:)

Can't wait for the update!

hugz,

rowena

Nice chapter, had to read a few chapters back to remember what happened but I liked this one. I had to read the Great Gatsby in school, I'm still not crazy about it. Good writing!

Keep updating! It's really quite nice! I like where Annica's development is coming in - it has potential to be a really long lasting story. Very nice!

L

yay great chapter. aww it was cute asking him if he wanted crust off or not. Cant wait for the next chapter.

if you like Lord of the rings or pitch black fanfics i have written two LOTR ones and on pitch black one i am still carrying on with them. please R&R them i would appreciate it.

i wonder what goes wrong. whatever it is it will be an interesting read the next chapter like all the rest have been

i ve always wondered how the line breaks show up

Warren in charge? Oh my! :P I can't wait to see what the scare is!