Delicioulsy Dark.

oh, thats just scary. i got the shivers...

WOW...wow...im kinda speechless...wow

*Shivers* Very dark, but very, very good! I especially liked the description of Willy's reactions during each kid's demise.

I always kinda wondered why he didn't seem to care a little more...*laughing*...I think the only reason he cared at ALL was because of lawsuits...hehehe!

you better update as soon as you get the chance!

Dark. I like it. I can see large potential here. You definitely have kudos from me, and I'm adding you to my story alert list. So, you'd better update and keep this going :-)