That was just an amazing fanfic - shatteringly beautiful, exciting, breathtakingly sexy - a love story full of need and fear. Yeow. So, so well written, psychologically intelligent and profound.

Heh. Thanks.

THE REVIEWING FOOL

Huh? The end of the relationship?

*distressed and confused*


Really funny and of course - smexy chapter. You are so damned good at writing the sex! No format for you!

LOL: And looking at Naoe is kind of like looking at **

Erm...is that right about Calcium? *runs to cupboard to get out the vitamins...*

THE REVIEWING FOOL

Whether we liked it or not? Are you crazy? It was brilliant.

Wow. Stunningly beautiful, smexy and so ... understanding of the psychology between these two. I loved the thoughts behind the intensity of passion.

THE REVIEWING FOOL

Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy this story. I've read it several times since a friend brought it to my attention and I must say I really liked it. I like your interpretation of the characters and I largely agree with your views on Takaya and Naoe. There's so little good MoB fic out there that it was wonderful to find this one. My only concrit is that I would have liked to have seen more of the reunion scene. I see what you were doing and it works wonderfully, don't get me wrong, but I like sap like that. LOL. Great job!

The Story is ok but alot of the thoughts are over Drawn out. I know the story line and all but having them over thinking everything is really bad. I like it and all it just was over drawn out at points. I think you could write your own storys with this kind of writing maybe you should try that.

*round of applause*...this...this is an awesome story!...totally fell in love with every minute of it...i must compliment on the way you write and especially how the story unfolded..truly amazing...and i just love the way you portray Naoe and Takaya...hehehehe...i just love all those smart ** comments from takaya...he just cracks me up with them...and i just have to say one thing about those sex scenes...it was blazing hot...you did a great job...^^...and the ending was just so perfect...totlly love it!

Yes, yes I did appreciate the smut. ^_^ And lots more to go, goodie...yay, 200 reviews for you!

I'm re-reading this amazing fic because it is teh awesomeness, and then I checked your review number and it said 198, and I'm like, "Hell, I can fix that!" Here's review 199 for you. This story rocks my socks and I totally worship you for writing this.

Kya~ this chapter was soo cute~ and sweet, awesomeness till the end! I hope there is more about how takaya was smoking Naoe's brand~ that was so cuute, I really want to see Naoe tease takaya about it ^_-, can't wait to read the next chapter... here I go

lol cute~ I can't wait to read the rest

amazing saga! well done!

This was so...HOT~! I loved it! THIS was what I was missing from the Mirage of blaze anime! OH MY GOSH~! Is there more to it? are there more smutty chapters to come? is it gonna be even awesomer! oh my gosh this is killing me!

btw: the cig thing was so cute, Naoe realizing that Takaya was thinking about him, and stuff, but he tried to hide it >/< that was adorable! I'm eager to see if Naoe brings that up and teases him about it, and if Takaya blushes... that'd be so cute! to see such a innocent side!! ^/^ well I just wanted to say this chapter REALLY fed my needs but I'm still hungry for more,and I kinda want them to go further!

I can't wait to see how you've/will be planning to take the story from here! Your a great write =D I'm kinda jealous ^_- ...

Awesome but why don't you right more I have some Ideas like something that Takaya did cought up to find hi sister running away don't know BUT NEVER STOP WRITING

This reinvigorated my love for Mirage of Blaze. It's a wonderful fic, one of the few from the series that is meaty and sexy and just oh, so perfectly in character it hurts. The ending was absolutely delicious.