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| Legendary Chimera 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseThis leaves me speechless. New York really was alive in this one. That was Casey and April all over. Okay, maybe not quit speechless;) |
| artykidd 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseOh Wow! That was really good. You captured april and Casey very well. |
| QueenOfTheUniverse 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseOh! So interesting! Of course it had to be Casey...And I can see him coming in with the bat as a cane...though not sure he would be the one saying all those things...but maybe...not sure...lol...great job! Will there be more!? |
| Reizod 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseVery well done. The emotions in this are well articulated yet at the same time retain the personal feel the characters involved. This take on the Romance of Casey and April has a different feel than many romances I've read. Original, to say the least |
| Pearl of the Dark Age 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was excellent! You have great narration and diction! Characters IC and a smooth, flowing pace. Good work! |