Reviews for The Parting of the Ways

Archangel Rhapsody
2006-09-13
ch 1,

abuseYou could make this into a bigger story if you wanted to. I like it.

Firestorm
2006-06-01
ch 1,

abuseIntriguing story and a lot different than what most fanfic writers write about. It's making me wonder whether this took place after the defeat of Talpa, or if it took place after they received new armors. That's good though. It does a brain good to think and wonder. There are a couple of parts that I am confused about. The second to the last paragraph, line four, you have Rowen being the Burning Man. What did you mean by that? Or did you mean Ryo, as he is the Ronin of Wildfire and Inferno? And in the last paragraph, line three, you mention White Blaze suddenly. Somehow the sentence doesn't seem to follow this one:( We sort of migrated together after the others left, the three of us.) At best, I am mostly confused. Maybe sometime when you have a chance you can clarify those parts to me. But overall I did enjoy the fanfic, and will add it to my favorites.

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