toocsad can't stop crying god job though

that was col i luved it! wonderful fanfics :)

aww sunflowers r nice. could you make a sequal? this is awsome!

I adore your take on the Twins (even if I don't read the slash ones)! Your take on them has inspired me to try my own hand at writing Sunny and Sides. More specifically, this story has brought a very interesting continuity point to my attention - the seperation of the Twins with one staying on Earth and the other on Cybertron. Talk about fanfic opportunities! I'm currently trying to write my own version of these events covering their time apart, you'll have to let me know how I do when I eventually post it. ;-) Great story!

sad :-( you should make a sequal. i love this story. it would be a shame to make it end here.

aw, although I don't think Prime would be that harsh.

That's very touching. I really like how you've characterized them, espeically Sunstreaker. He's usually so brash that it's nice to see how gentle he is with Sideswipe. Well written.

*has to wipe away a tear*

This really hit me hard. I absolutely adore the Lambo Twins (A good reason I like the Transformer Gen 1 was those two, and I'm part of a twin) and the thought of separation is... unbearable.

Description was nailed, the characters being as accurate and well-versed (on Sunstreaker's and Ratchet's parts), and I could totally relate to the twins! Poor things! This is a great read, and I'm adding it to faves, if you don't mind. And sunflowers... oh, Sideswipe!

And my twin says *and don't mind it*, "Evil author break-up twins! Bad!"

-MabelZen

How sweet. I love the sunflower part.

I'd always wondered how they'd feel if they had to be separated, since in the show they're together all the time. Thanks for answering that for me. Great fic. Keep yp the good work!