Very good, but next time double space, it was a real strain on my eyes.

rating *** out of ******, it was good but im not really a gundam fan, this is pretty biased.

Bobbolis out

I am continuously awed at how you capture each character -perfectly- utterly flawless. Your style of writing has helped me a great deal as well. I just hope that one day I can live up to the legend that is you LOL.

-Kyle

I liked that! have you ever seen "Revoltionary Girl Utena" If you like Big O and Gundam Wing, you'll love Utena! But I loved your story! you have such a gift, I wish I could write like that!

I have minimal knowledge of Gundam Wing, and any of its predecessing shows. I do know, however, that the feelings you've portrayed between Zechs and Noin are based in reality, and that the pair is kept in-character throughout your fic. Once again, a wonderful view into the characters' psyches. I agree-all one's writings ARE one's children...but unfortunately I cannot believe that you are having as much trouble with Sally and Wufei as you say; then again, though I'm sure whatever you've come up with is good, but apparently not yet at your high standard. Anyway, I'm making no sense with these run-on sentences, so here's my point: YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER! And this is a good story. Keep at it!

love anything about 6 x 9

nice story