Dun, da dun dun... dun, da dun dun, DUN!... And that's about all I have to say.

No, really. It's a good idea. Are you going to make this a story, or are you stopping there? Because you have my full and undivided attention. Oh, and anyone who wants to read my story so far and review, I would not object. At all. :)

I- up- oh my god. That was certainly out of left field! Brilliant, though. I'm not actually sure how well Barbossa could pull off that line (it would be like him saying "I'm CAPTAIN Hector Barbossa, savvy?" it might not work) but in this context, it's the only thing to say. And that sounded bad, I know. This is really just me nitpicking here, I love it, okay?

O.O;;

(v.well done!)

I like this. Very imaginative. I laughed at the last part. I felt cheated after waiting for the credits to finish and then seeing a little monkey. I would have liked this much better. And the credits were long!

Oh, Jack's going to be so pissed! This is clever. I never thought to make a short addition to the movie, and neither has anyone else (as far as I know) on fanfiction. Very cool! And I love how you worked with one of my favorite lines "Not probable" also. Keep writing, you've got a great imagination. -Kat O' Nine Tails