 hotneji24 10/23/07 . chapter 1NICE!
LUVD IT!
*banana* |
 Gerald 1/31/07 . chapter 1 3. so long T_T
Anyways, not much of a comment Nag bigay lang ako ng review. |
 numba1shorty 9/4/06 . chapter 1haha...that was cute! _
i luved it. |
 Midnight 8/3/06 . chapter 1 that was good even though I DIDNT UNDERSTAND A NDVNVNF THING!
your fan
Midnight |
 hakomakura 7/6/06 . chapter 1kawaii! :3 i'm going to read your other stories now. |
 ginny7777 6/23/06 . chapter 1cool its nice, but do you have any neji stories or know of neji stories pairing neji with a non-naruto character, like where your the girl? |
 CherryBomb91 6/21/06 . chapter 1This was really sweet! I liked it! For some reason I didn't get the usual e-mail about 'The Shattered Pieces' updating. So I'll have to read the eighth chapter next... |
 lilmisssushi 6/4/06 . chapter 1Hey there!
Hahaha that was awesome. I'd have loved to see Neji's face when Sakura..er..surprised him. lol.
There was this one bit I especially liked;
'Sakura tiptoed to ease the discrepancy between their heights. Now, their face was just centimeter apart…'
Hehehe. It was really sweet, how the cold-blooded Hyuuga was the one who was pushed up against a tree (and getting harassed) while Sakura tip-toed to meet his lips...
*sigh...
And oh I was kinda wondering if you tried putting breaks in, but they didn't stay? That always happens to me. It might make your story even better if you stuck in those ruler thingies though, to separate the scenes more lol.
Anyways, bravo! And good luck with your future writing! |
 simple-viet-girl 6/3/06 . chapter 1cute story! keep up the good work |
 animemistress419 6/1/06 . chapter 1Aw! That was so sweet! I look forward to more Neji/Saku fics from you! |
 Hot Sexy Soccer Babe 777 6/1/06 . chapter 1Great story Neji/Sakura rules! |
 d e l e t e . s t a r s 5/31/06 . chapter 1Really cute! Hehehehe! But I like 'The Shattered Pieces' better! I used to be Broken and Fallen Angel of Death. |
 Mere Anarchy 5/31/06 . chapter 1I like it! The idea is really cute. I was kind of confused by the flashback thing, though. . . maybe you should try to make it a bit more clear when you switch from Sakura's office to the sparring field. Well, I'm pretty sure those were the two settings. Like I said, I was pretty confused on that part.
But otherwise, magnificent job!
Also, I've read The Shattered Pieces, and it's a shame you won't be continuing it. You'll just have to write another story to make up for it! ;) |
 BWOLFY 5/31/06 . chapter 1cute! |
 diet coffee 5/31/06 . chapter 1CUTE! I Love it! Keep it Up! That was great! AWESOME! |