That was sad. It was good but sad. -_- Keep up the good work

aw *snifs* that was sooooo dad...

::sob:: is *that* what happens! are you serious? oh my god... there's more. you've got some trick ending or something... no you dont. it really does end this way doesnt it... oh gods... thats so frickin' depressing. good writing. depressing ending.

poor shin! my poor baby! ::crying:: its good, but pooooooooooooor shin-chan!

Oooh wasn't expecting that one... damn

That was great, you need to keep going. You can't leave all your readers hanging here. I NEED MORE! Please? *huge chibi eyes* Pretty please?

Eeek! Very good, the chara are just right, and it's easy to tell who's who without names, but are you going to leave us hanging for long? Please, please, please continue it. Please?

::curses herself for reading it at 5:30 in the morning. I didn't get it at all. I'll have to go read it again when I'm more awake. Sage is the blond crying right? And Sai is the one with the "mothering natre"? Sorry, I'm so tired. I love your storys, and as soon as I wake up, I'm sure I'll like and understand this one.

Nice. Good intrigue - I hope you write more soon. The characters were on the spot.

Wow, very well written! I am impressed! Please keep going!

You are one of my favorite Ronnin authors and so far I have loved every story I have read by you. This one is no exception. Please put up more for me to see soon.

Nice writing style, kind of reminds me of my own. I like the way you describe things and make the words intertwine so that they seem more real. Great Job.