You're brilliant. That's all I really have to say.

WHOA! That was a wondrous piece! Very sensual, but at the same time light and fluffy.

IGC t DM

Beautiful...sweet...)

Whew. *turns the desk fan to blow on me instead of the computer*

Hot. Well-written. Love it! Thanks for writing it...

Hot, hot, hot!

Great story, I really really loved reading this one. Keep up the good work!

Wow... that was hot. Incredible! I'm off to read more of your fics now!

Excellent story. Favorite part: "Eager and energetic, she attacked the tendons in his neck with a certain glorious gusto that had his eyes trained on the ceiling in an attempt to keep his baser instincts at bay. A slick tongue found the hollow of his throat, laying it there for a moment as her hands skated up the clothed expanse of his chest."

Because you know in "Naked Gun" when Frank Drebin says 'she had the kind of legs you'd like to suck on for a day'? That's how I feel about Grissom's neck. This is some hot writing, but it's safe enough for how do you do it!

There’s nothing sexier than your fics involving sweaty Grissom.

wow, hot and beautiful !

blitzkrieg

Delightful! Love the "June cocoon".

"sweating his sins out," and "Perfection was a word like google, he simply never pondered it because the very notion of either gave him a headache." and then Grissom's inner voice saying he was an excellent lover...

I loved all of the above and more.

Ooh, so hot and so good. Love the realism, and the "I love you" part made my stomach skip. You're the master.

This is truly beautiful! The scene is so detailed that one can actually see and hear it play out. Reading it left me feeling all warm and fuzzy, and a bit like a peeping tom!