Wow! I've been reading fan fiction for about a year now and I can't believe I haven't ever come across anything of your before. I really liked this, and your others that I have just greedily whizzed my way through. You really have the characters down to a T, they feel so much like themselves. Lots of people can write Teal'c and Jack, but Sam is much harder and you've done a great job.

Now I'm going back to keep working my way trough your Stargate stuff.

very nicely angsty...without being too OTT

good job