It is a true shame that you haven't updated in ages. ( I really loved what you were doing.

That is a lousy situation Kelthere finds himself in.

The story is well-written and a joy to read.

Good story so far, I like it. Though I wish Kelthere would get over with his saddened stubborness - its really not the end of the world. Maybe he could get to another Weyrs hatching and be transferred back or what. Syderi seems to like him quite a bit. Or find something to do in the Weyr.

You have a good point that youve actually let us know its on hiatus, but not intended to be abandoned, you know. Many authors wont do it and were left to worry. I hope you get it done soon, its been a while, now. I wish you many good ideas!

Please tell us that the poor lad will get to do something worthwhile with his life, and possibly get a couple of firelizards? Feel for him... :(

good story,well thought out characters, it still on hiatus or abandoned?

is Kelthere gonna be dragonless and miserable for long? gd story so far ;p

He shouldn't be so bitter. It's not the end of the world if he

doesn't impress. Of course it may take him awhile to relize this.

Oh that's sad. Still, I guess you've got something planned for Kelthere, right? Please? Also, I feel really sorry for his friends, who are trying to be kind, so I hope they can get reconciled.

Probably sensible to get the whole thing written, though! See you again when you're done.

t-d

Very good, I like where this is going.

I really like your characters. This story has a good beginning - can't wait to read about the hatching - I love hatchings! It'll be interesting to see who gets what. Please write another chapter soon!

good story. are you going to continue it?

wow, you really did an awesome job. even though there are a lot of characters, it wasn't overwhelming or confusing at all. i'm looking forwards to reading more!

I like this fic becase you give more of canidates pov and not everyone is impressed. You show he is very emotional about this.

Maybe he should get a fire lizard. The only thing I didn't like was I had to go back and see who was impressed and who was left behind. Oh and is F'kyer's name penonced like the curse word?

hey um is syderi i think shes the gold rider, sorry if im wrong with so many people its confusing, well anyway r she and kelthere going to have a relationship or what?

THATS SO SAD! *sob sob sob sob*