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| queenofthebookworms 2006-11-28 ch 2,  | abuseA really great story. Unlike some it didn't go to far, turning into an M or R rated story, but it had just the right amount of romance and sentamentality. I think you should write another couple of chapters. The way it finishes leaves you wanting more. I loved the Guardians of Time and this was my fave pairing. Keep up the good work. PolgaratheSorceress3900 |
| januaryfreeze92 2006-09-05 ch 2, | abuseAw, that is so sad! I think you should do for more chapters. Two more from eachpoint of view based on The Dark And two more for The Key. |
| TheExactBrandofHerion 2006-09-01 ch 2, | abuseOMG i loved it.it was so sweet. |
| justpeachy32 2006-08-29 ch 2, | abuseI really really like this one. It's really sad, but it I think you get the characters really well. PLEASE write more to this . . . pretty please with a cherry on top? Somebody already said this but here it goes again: write more chapters about them actually starting to love each other and finally getting together! So far so good!! |
| Reasonable 2006-08-27 ch 2, | abuseOMG that made me cry... Its even better once you added the Arkarian part... Good job! |
| x0xkatiex0x 2006-08-27 ch 2, | abuseO FOR GOODNESS SAKES! lol cant u just take some poetic lisence and have them run at eachother singing whitney housten - i will always love you, and then be together for ever and ever? CMON the suspense is just painful. honestly painful... but i love it none the less :P feel free to update more! lol xx |
| justpeachy32 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuseSeriously . . . you should continue this story! I like it a lot because we didn't really get their feelings as much in the books. Plus, the way you write makes it seem like it really is one of the books!! Please add on to this! (I think somebody else already said this: write about how their love grows, and the awkwardness when they have to see each other . . . and Matt. . . lol) Thanks for writing! |
| xxxRosyxxxBabyxxx 2006-08-26 ch 2, | abuseOh. I wanna CRY! Tragıc. Why do storys make me wanna cry? |
| FMA4EVER 2006-08-25 ch 2, | abusethat was so sweet! i'm so glad you added another chapter! now if you could only make them get together...*hint hint* in Christ, ~FMA4EVER~ |
| twighlightangel61090 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abusewow talk about desperate love. i liked it though i really think you should do a sequal with arkarians feelings ~Jess |
| The Hobbit Ivy 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. Absolutely wow. Okay, so this story had a few errors in it (just small little typos), but all of that disappears from my technical mind and is replaced by the fact that I can actually relate to Isabel's thoughts. That's hard to achieve in print a lot of the time. The way that she analyzes everything through and thinks of every possible alternative, and then ends up criticising her own thoughts is something that I think goes through every girl's head when she's got a crush on someone. And so many kudos go to you for that! -Ivy |
| Dark Angel's Blue Fire 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseCute! Great fic! |
| smithyfan 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseAww the saddness of unrequited love (well she thinks it is here okay!) loved this fic so sad you must continue it or i'll die!! x |
| januaryfreeze92 2006-06-09 ch 1, | abusei like it... maybe you should continue it as her feelings for him blooms? |
| FMA4EVER 2006-06-07 ch 1, | abusehey, that was so sweet! i liked the way you captured Isabel's emotions...very nice...could you maybe continue it...make it a two shot...that would be cute! peace out! In Christ, ~FMA4EVER~ |