I hope that Team 5 gets their comeuppence soon! A$$holes! hee hee! Good story.

For a team that has been working for so long, team 5 seems to lack professionalism. It's like they don't try to even follow procedure anymore. It's rather deplorable how they act. It's a team that should be broken up and traded off if possible.

I'm off to read the aftermath.

Later days.

liked the style you wrote this in, good. hope you leave ez with a pulse!

This is FANTASTIC! Bring on The Aftermath!

dude- another excellent story. can't wait for the aftermath!

Good job! I love the way you get into the characters' heads. Keep the stories coming!

Wonderful pre-quel, Celeste! I love your psychological perspectives!

This one was great! I am glad you posted more on this concept.

We definately want more!

This is the prequel to "Loyalty" but should be read after? There is something odd about that. But it was good. I like how you use point of view to tell the story. Now for the epilouge, however you spell that word, what are you going to do to Team 5 because of this? Or what is Team 7 going to do to Team 5? Or what is Team *8* going to do to Team 5? Just ramdom thoughts, but hey get typing!

This was a good explaination of the events in Loyalty. I enjoyed loyalty, but then I like stories that give you an "outsider's persepective". Loyalty was a great way to show what it is about team 7 that makes them so good at what they do, and how their being good at it affects other teams, not always positively. I especially enjoyed reading events from the viewpoint of each character. What they saw verses what someone else saw. An all around good read. Hope to see more of this.

Another awesome story! Keep 'em comin'! :D