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lou
2007-02-28 . chapter 7
typical kitt getting jelous then its settled? i think?
but why hasnt artha asked kitt out allready?...
agh! she dating MOORDRYD!
what! im sorry but who on the plannet would want to date moordyd?
artha i can understand by moordyd?
(throws up) poor girl
Fyrfly23
2006-10-12 . chapter 6
OH MY GOSH! Moodryd dances?! MIRACLE! Update Soon!
The Furox
2006-08-25 . chapter 5
I'm really enjoying this story! And I particularly like the way you're handling the dragons in chapter 5. They come across more like they're equal players in the story and that makes it more fun. And I really the idea of Eclypse making raspberry sounds to express herself! I also like the extra focus on what Decepshun is thinking along the way and how she followed Moordryd into the tent at the end to help him gloat. It's so much nicer when the dragons are involved in the story instead of just standing around in the background.

Keep it up and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Fyrfly23
2006-08-11 . chapter 5
Great chapter! Update Soon!
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