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-Kai Isolated-
2007-04-01
ch 1,
abuseOMG. I LOVE THIS.
a brilliant potrayal of kai by the flame. it really does suited every particle of this in him. *squeak* i luv this! ^^

you really really really really have a great sense of imagination! (unlike me --")

and i have no idea why i didn't come across this fic before, thank god i checked your profile! (after being directed from deviantart) lol.

~when Logic meets Art~
-Kai Isolated-
Angel Sakura x
2006-07-30
ch 1,
abuseSorry, I think I'm reviwing a little bit late but I thought I'd check out all your One-Shots because I remembered reading 'Seeping' and I thought it was great so... I just decided I'd check out the others too. XD. Right, anyway.

Wow. ¬.¬ When I was reading this I was seriously pulled in. I was actually expecting it to be a kinda kissing/hugging type one, but it wasn't, yet I still found it so enjoyable. It's nice to see you are keeping away from all that fluff stuff and are expressing their love in a different way... through a candle and flame! I mean, WOW! That's just such a good IDEA!

And to think, you made it last pretty long too. I can tell this has been well thought out... you must have one imaginative mind, but hey, I'm not complaining. *nods* Imaginations are good. Unlike mine, which seems to be full of Kais dressed in bikinis, but anyway... ¬.¬U

I really really really really really (Can I express it anymore?) loved it. Now, I'm off to read your others. ^.^ *adds to favourites*

~ANJ
-EnIt-SiRhc-
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abusewell done !! you're a really good writer keep it up ! :) Love your story !!
aquariusfan
2006-07-16
ch 1,
abusethat was good. :) wat happened?? how come she kept lighting the candle.
Angelic Kitsune
2006-06-04
ch 1,
abuseooh...cool!
I totally luved this...im sorry i didnt review earlier!

Cute story...ahh...fire...:D

Anywaiiz...great fic!

Kitsune-chan *_*
xxx
2006-06-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love the symbolizem, very well done.
k4gh
2006-06-01
ch 1,
abuseAll I can say is... its a really really great one-shot! X3
Chelseamuffin.
2006-06-01
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was so cute! I loved it! Sorta reminds me of this book I read recently, Inkheart. Well, mastering the flame, anyway. But I won't go into that right now. Lol, sorry, exam time, and I'm just comparing all these works in English, so that now it's almost all I can do! But yeah.

Excellent use of symbolism. The flame being Kai (duh) and the candle Hilary (not so duh), and them just being so compatible, going together like flower to boquet, or... well, you get it, right? Lol, more of that exam talk, great ^^0

Anyway, great work, SE! I loved it!
tear-drowned-angel
2006-06-01
ch 1,
abuseaw it was beautiful! i loved it you a good writer!

tear-drowned-angel X
Winter Ashby
2006-05-31
ch 1,
abuseWell, I wanted to be the first reviewer - because I was the first reader... but oh well. I will settle for second. This, once again, was great. I love the symbolism, and I'm really glad that you decided to post this. Your courage has given me some too. I think I will now go and write some more. You just seem to get better each time I read what you right. Kai as the flame was perfect, and Hilary as the candle was just the right about of allegory. Keep writing, and as always I can't wait to see what you do next - hint hint: something not Beyblade? Maybe? Okay, so that's just selfish me, trying to pull you away. But obviously have such a talent for this fandom, and you're so good at it! Just keep writing, I will read anything you write. See you later!

-Ash
thiscowhatesmilk
2006-05-31
ch 1,
abuseso beautiful... i love the flames part... it's so... nice. (in case you haven't noticed... i don't know how to review... it's just so hard cuz... in my vocabulary... it's... just good. like... i dunno i should read the dicitonary more -_-) hehehe
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