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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-04-20 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the parts where Gil and Sara were exchaning Christmas presents. |
| Kritari 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abuseSo cute! Very good written! Congrats! I love your fic, so sweet! |
| Kristafied 2006-09-06 ch 1, | abuseAw. I love that last exchange, and I love Sara's reflections about Grissom being physically affectionate. Very sweet. It's a scene I could imagine following the scene in the finale. |
| lisab1986 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was great! I love how you seamlessly integrated the last scene of WtG into your fic. The story of the ugly pyjamas was awesome - I can totally see Greg laughing at the hat, and telling Sara he needed a shirt to go with it! Awesome work! |
| anneruhland 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this story. It paints a really great picture of G/S homelife. I like to thing of them having quiet evenings together just being with each other and relaxing. Kissing is good too but this is like a snapshot of real life. |
| JesSickUh 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseAw now *I* wanna spoon with Grissom! What a sweet fic. |
| LapsusStili 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseNicely done! You blended elements from the episode with your own musings so well. I laughed out loud when I read: "The shorts that came just above his knees made his bow legs more obvious, but she found that feature incredibly cute." Call me crazy, but I love his bowed legs! |
| ayesha-s 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseso sweet! totally love it! |
| xyber116 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. |
| Lone Stranger 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseGod, how I love the fugly farmer's hat and his hawaiian pajamas :D I read somewhere that the hawaiian shirt is actually William Petersen's shirt, and he picked it out to wear in that scene. :D The fic was really good. I love how you just slipped the ending dialogue in there. The transition was seamless.:) -Stranger |
| Graciebird 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI love how you incorporated the whole time line into this. It was such a nice fic. maybe you should send it to the writers and tell them that this is what happened, so they don't mysteriously forget that Grissom and Sara are together when they open the new season in September. |
| achingankle 2006-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love how you explained what happened before the conversation. Most people only explained after. nice job all around! |
| PLK 2006-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! Very nicely written. I really love the way you encorporated the elements of season 6 into this story without placing a definitive timeline. Very well done! |
| Quill-32 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It's quiet and comfortable, and the image of Grissom in the pajamas and hat is priceless! |
| TAE1 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseLovely. Absolutely lovely. I like his Panama hat, too, but was a bit startled by the jammies...but you make a lot of sense, because I really don't see him as much of a pattern-person. Very well done, thank you. |