BWHAHAHA i spork anyone who comments after meh! *SPORK*
anyways >> i loved this story it was ggrreeaatt like tony the tiger great XD please up date soon.

Oh, damn. O.o This is amazingly done. And the fact that it's completely plausible makes you think so much deeper into it. The characterization is just... wow. And the descriptions paint the scenery so that you can, not only see, but /feel/ the surroundings too. Absolutely beautiful work.

i love this story please type more! ...sorry diden't mean to rush you but i miss this story...

Lol I won't spork you, although the "believe it" sure raised MY eyebrow. great update, I need another chapter from you. ch, i haven't updated in way too long. I'm just as bad as you are lol. I love how you've started following the KH II storyline now, with the lines and the thieves fiasco and all that. It's exciting, in a way. But gez... is there going to be a happy ending?

Hey,u just gained a reader,sweetheart (instead of losing one)
I just love your fanfic,I hope you´ll update very soon! :D

Saludos
S.A

START WRITING YOUR ** OFF, DAMMIT, CAUSE YOU LEFT THIS CHAPPIE WITH A HUGE CLIFFHANGER!

THE SUSPENSE THE SUSPENSE!

and everyone loves a little aku x roku moment! ^.^

you aren't going to kill axel off like in the game, are you? *whimper*

~CHU!

-Scoots into the fanbase-

I love it.. It made me feel so sad for Axel. You're very good at writing this stuff.. Keep it up~

I look forward to an update. -stares at screen hopefully-

: D

You're back!! (Again) ;) I liked this chapter. Update soon, please.

Awws, hungover Axel.. Great chapter!! Update again soon!

This...is...AWESOME! I think I would like to join in your spork war if you let me. Poor Axel...PLease update soon!

Yay, part 2 is up! I wouldn't spork you. Only Satan sporks people...on weekends. Not that I have time to make out a sporking schedule...yeah. I haven't been able to update my stuff because of high school too...'tis a ** to deal with. Congrats on finding time to squeeze a chapter in and I'll be happy to see your next update!

I love both of your stories! You are such a good writer, I can't wait for you to update again (whichever one, they are both great). ^_^

I love this! Continue it soon. :)

Wow- just wow. I wish I could be eloquent and go on and on about the sheer greatness that is your story, but... Nothing else really needs to be said.
...I'll say it anyway, though! Don't worry, I'll try not to bore you too much! *sweats*

Your writing is magnificent and compelling. I like how you explain not only -what- they do, but also -why-. Their thoughts and feelings and needs... Also, I especially love how you portray the characters in such true, believable, fashion. They each have little nuances about how they act that is absolutely perfect.The words make them come to life- if they weren't Nobodies, they'd seem almost human... Definately the best long AkuRoku fic that I've read.

I'm actually in the middle of my own AkuRoku fanfiction... Not only did I see that you came up with a couple of ideas similar to mine (now I'm going to have to rewrite, I don't want to seem like I copied...) but also, it makes me desperately want to improve my own work. ^^; Ah! Now look what you've gone and done- you woke up my perfectionist instincts... I won't be able to go to sleep for two weeks, tops... *groans*

Great chapter! Oh, could you also check out my stories? pwease!?