Hello! ^_^
Sorry it took me so long to review, but I've been deprived of internet access for quite some time now, and just have got to read this. I do think that your first selfishness fic was better, but this one was quite enjoyable as well. I, for one, would like to see this new idea you mentioned put into writing.

Haha, poor Raz, having to deal with those creepy crazy fangirls.'
Cute story. ^_^

** you

Hurting for reviews, eh? That's a good thing, because from what I've learned being on this site for years, very, very, very few people enjoy a good story. Look at Nightfire04. One of the worst serious writers I've ever come across, never, ever gets better, and he has a fanbase the size of New York. So if your story is not getting reviews, that probably means it's of such good quality, no one wants to read it.

Note: I am completely serious here, none of that was sarcasm at all.

Hey there girly! It's good to see you're still writing. I haven't played PoP, but I'm still interested in this story. Heh, and here I thought that this chick couldn't get any crazier. Hopefully my computer'll be working one day so I can finish reading this. I'm on a friend's computer right now. :(