pocket-sized power-punch.
thats all i can say.

it was pretty good or should i say amazing? sad yet captivating...

Heya! It's me! Lol!

Gah! This is *gorgeous*. It captures the feelings of the character perfectly and balances the emotion really well. As in, its not so angsty it becomes stupid, but not too little it doesn't have an effect. Do you get what I mean?

My favourite line here was:
"I watched helplessly from beyond as he destroyed himself to become immortal. Seven times! Yet I could not stop him; how could I?"
I'm not sure why really - I just like the idea behind it. And the wording. Its all great!

Awesome job anyway - I'm off to read some more of your stuff! :D

Kate x

when did you write all these? wow will you countinue it? I would love to see what Merope will say about everything else that happened to het son...

This was a good portrayal of Merope, albeit with a few punctuation errors. It's a very touching story as well, even though I felt that it could have been a little longer. Well done, and thanks for leaving reviews to a few of my fan fics!

Oh, this is very good! You've got right into her mind. I feel so sorry for her, now...having to watch her son destroy his soul and being powerless to stop him. Poor girl. Anyway, great job!

I like the last line, my dear...;) HAHAHA anyway...again, I really like this, and I'm glad you let me help with it...nice metaphor running throughout (analogy? whatever) and it really fits with our lovely (or not-so-lovely) Merope.
I really liked her character. I hope we see a bit more of her in the last (SOB) book.
Nice! :D But you already knew that...
~Ivy

This story is so good! The last sentence really moved me. "How could I have explained to him that I never lived?" I think that's probably my favorite line!
Maybe you could do a story on Tom Riddle Sr and Merope Gaunt, when they were together?
I've added this story to my C2 Archive, but if you don't want the story there, just email me to remove it...
Anyway, looking forward to more stories by you...

hpfan99

Powerful story. The poor girl--I've been wanting to write Meropefic for a while too, and I like how you handled this one, focusing on the idea that she never really had a life at all, while her son destroyed his by chasing immortality. Very good ending line, in particular.

that was a very touching story it was prefect and fit right into the harry potter story.ur a very talented writer, keep up the great work!