 Ambivalence 2006-06-01 . chapter 1Haha, this was great! One of the best laughs I've had in a while. I've read 'Guard Dog' so when I saw this was based off of it, I knew I had to read it, and I definitely am not disappointed! The competitive personalities of Seto and Jou were fantastically written, and I absolutely loved the contests - they were so funny to picture. And of course... the skinny dipping scene! Ah, that was the best. I loved Seto's reaction to Jou's "punishment", lol. Poor Seto seemed to be in shock. I also liked how you wrote it from Mokuba's perspective, it was interesting, and he's just so darn cute, haha.
Great job with the whole thing, it fit that pic perfectly, and I especially enjoyed the humor. |