Natalie is so cute! Definitely the one to pre-melt David's heart for Nick.

I must say that I love how your stories are always happy! I always end up writing tragic stuff, but it's so nice to read happy stories! Even if I'm not totally for Nick and David, I still loved the story. The soccer parts where great with everyone playing, and I loved Nat's comments, specially the one about not being able to kiss while Venis exploded. Hilarious! Can I borrow that line? lol. Like I said before, someday I'll write some good csi fic, and that gave me the idea of vegas exploding while nick and greg are kissing, could be romantic and hilarious at the same time...we'll see...next thing I need is a solid plot, lol. Anyway, great work, once again! You're awesome!

This is one of my favorite Nick/David stories and I'm surprised that there aren't more reviews for it. I just wanted to tell you that you write this coupling amazingly and please continue to write them, I need me a fix of Nick/David!

-Lenora

This is one of those feel good stories. Like the film 'Just Like Heaven'. Beautiful.
Cheers,
Colleen

Yay! It's different from what I normally read and I like it!

This is an incredibly story. :} I really like the idea of the whole team coming together to play soccer.
I think Natalie was a little advanced for an elevenyearold, though, and I would know because two of my siblings are that age. They're twins.
But in part three, the part where she felt ashamed and scared of having done something wrong, was something I definitively would describe as realistic.
You are an incredible writer, keep up the good work!

was this ever a one shot? if so i like what you've done with it!

*grins* and i could not be happier that you did post this. i loved it.

Epic.
And awesome.

This is a sweet story. I loved every second of it.

The way Nat talked seemed a bit advanced for an 11 year old but I'm not overly familiar with 11 year olds and how they speak so I could be off base here.

Now, off to read more of your stuff that keeps popping up around here.

Have you been keeping all these stories back for a rainy day? You written so much in the last week I haven't been able to read it all.

I love the whole team getting together, and the competition between David and Catherine is very in character. Good job, as always.