wow. really excellent look. LOVED it!

Wow. This is lovely. Loads of beautiful symbolic imagery, great work. You've captured the character and the thoughts really really well.

Particularly love the last line, it is great. Says so much about both of them.

This is an intriguing idea, unique certainly. It seems a little incomplete, and I would like to see some more solid interaction or introspection. But it's cleverly written and definitely brings up a new thought I hadn't considered before at all.

"Even his name was that of a star." - Lovely little crack.

Great! I'm going to hunt YOU! Got a new victim to stalk!

Very well written. I love the comparisions you make, and I love how well you wrote Snape's mind.

Also perfect!

Lovely! Very interesting take on their last names.

Very nice.

Definately an interesting comparison between the two.

I like that you didn't have Snape feeling remorse or pity for Sirius' death--that would just be too...unSnapelike...

Excellent job.

Good one-shot. Even as he died, Sirius Black was a prince--he'll always be a hero (albeit a fairly stupid one to not look where he was) to the DA. Snape will be lucky to get an unmarked grave.

hmm unique take on things. It sounds like the start of something very interesting. Is this one-shot? Well, if it is, and I think it is, it's good. But it could be the start of something even better. You'll probably get a better review from me later, but I must rush off to get ready for the day.

~*Skittles*~

Nice character insight and an interesting meditation on names - such an important thing in JKR's world.

This is good. :) Nice comparison too.

Your stuff is always very well-written.

It's a good story. I was just a little surprised by the ending. I though Snape was going to feel pity for him. Snape feel pity? I don't know what I was thinking, haha. Good story though.