Reviews for Indelicate
Sofipitch 7/6/12 . chapter 1
This was very sweet.
dragonfly10 5/20/12 . chapter 1
sort of something new
RedWingedAngel002 6/29/10 . chapter 1
Continuuuue! O Lols. Nicely done.

Ari chan
Mejii 4/7/10 . chapter 1
Oh so it's you ... again

Hueh...

come on dear finish magic doll...

I love it...

youre mean making me cry and feel...

Incomplete...

I'm alrealy sad... my brother left...

Finish thet darn doll!

Please.

God...Lord I'm begging you

Please
ArAshiMitArAshi 9/22/09 . chapter 1
This is very good! I think it's my favorite so far
ishmaranara 12/17/08 . chapter 1
Implied well enough and a good job at the juxtaposition of Winry build versus strength.
KatsyKat 12/11/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful! Hot! Awesome! You are a VERY distracting writer... for shame taking people away from their work! LOL - this was a great job! I love that your stories have a theme all the way through - you stay on and elaborate your point beautifully!
Kawaii Rin-chan 8/4/07 . chapter 1
That was cute! Hmm, I would try for another word but I'm half asleep. D It really is good though. Afterall you saw those reviews? Anyway, Favoring this.

-Rin
dennisud 6/27/07 . chapter 1
A bit limey but ok
MyChemicalRomance-fangirl 3/31/07 . chapter 1
that was so awsome! this couple is one of my favs, next to Inuyasha and Kagome (from Inuyasha) and Kaoru and Kenshin (from Rurouni Kenshin). it was so cute, even the lemon!;}
liltrix 3/29/07 . chapter 1
Wow, very well written. I love it. And this pairing._
lilpunkrocker101 12/11/06 . chapter 1
tehe! cool story!
Mayura-Hikari-090 11/13/06 . chapter 1
Good job! I really like this one! EdxWin 4EVER!
BishiHarem 9/29/06 . chapter 1
Cute!
KatieB19 8/24/06 . chapter 1
that was awsome! i loved it! )
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