I am glad to hear that you have gotten published, but I do not find it surprising after reading many of the stories you have written on here. You are quite a talented writer. Good luck!

I adored this story. It was the most brilliant thing I've read in a very, very long time. It took me a few all-nighters to finish it, but it was so worth it...

I love everything about this story. I love Harry Snape, part-Veela-Draco, and Fred and George as Harry's best friends rather than Ron and Hermione. It's cool that Hermione was his friend despite that, though; and I love that John stopped being such a prat.

The relationships were all so adorable, and you told the story so well. I have nothing bt absolute adoration for this work. :D Later, when I'm not being hurried off the computer, I'll read some more of your work!

Thanks for the awesome fic! :D

I enjoyed this story very much. I thought it was a very fun concept. Good luck with your future writing.

Are you up for just a little constructive crit? I'd say the chapter was pretty well done, but maybe you should've worked a bit on the howler to ron part. It came out a bit...shallow.But I love the story, no doubt!

I really liked this story.

even though its bee years since this has been completed I can honestly say that I really loved this story ^_^

it was a great emotional ride and I'm happy I got the chance to read it

I really love this story and I was wondering if there is going to be a sequel? please please I really love it!

wow...but it's over? *cries*

that was very origional, very good, and very...well, readable.

i just wish you specified how draco as a veela was, such as the whole thing about harry being his sorta mate and all that implied. you mentioned that they didnt have all classes together or a room, like normal veelas, so i was wondering if draco HAD to stay near harry, or what...?

m...8/10

hee. love the bat, although (or maybe because) i'm sure Sev wouldn't like that symbol of himself.
...must read, cannot review more
*runs to next chapter button giggling*

HA! I KNEW IT!
i thought draco was going to be veela who attached to harry (i mean, c'mon, its another twist that's going to throw harry though a loop, why not?) from the first time his eyes went siler!...okok, maybe moreso the second or third, but you get the point.

anyway, great story so far, and now i face the painful decision to either keep reading and possibly miss somehting cause i should be sleeping, or just go to sleep now and maybe read more tomorrow...but there's the stupid schoolwork...grr.

oh, and i like the whole idea about harry's elvin (elfin?) religion and all the stuff that comes with it, never would have pegged 'em as a seer, but it works!

This is a nicely written story so far. I do have to say though that I now have the urge to play Fire Emblem though andeagerly await the appearence of Ike and Soren.

I'm gunna just take a moment of silence here for just a second.


Kay, this has to be the best (and longest) Harry Potter fanfic I HAVE EVER read. It's got everything! I love Harry and Severus and Draco! and Lucius! I'm getting all choked up cuz it's over!! I swear, this is amazing. I love this and favourited both you and it. Keep up the fantasic work!!

Wow! This was fantastic! I loved how you started from childhood and encompassed so much of Harry's life. I loved the Elvish aspects and how you incorporated religion in this story. I also enjoyed the family bond Harry shared with his father (Yay Severus!) as well as the his bonds with Draco (they are so cute and sweet!) Lucius, Narcissa (even if we don't see her for the majority of the story), Fred and George (I want friends like them!), Remus and Sephiran, Rhys and Marcia, Hermione, Blaise, and even the Potters.
I'm not used to seeing Harry as a pacifist. In my mind he's more of a fighter but I love how you still made him strong and fiesty but still true to his Elvish roots. You're characterization of him was excellent and consistent. I also liked how you stayed with only his perspective. Usually I like to peek inside the heads of other characters but I thouroughly enjoyed only being with Harry. His thoughts, views, and actions were interesting and I loved seeing the story through his eyes.

Realy a great story! Thank you! Can't wait to read you're next story. You're awesome! XD

I wanted to review before I finished the story, it's really good. I like it very much. There's so many unique aspects, and you manage to pull them all off. Harry being born two years earlier - I really like his friendship with Fred and George, I've seen them being friends with eachother, but never best friends. The Luna Veela, the Father!Severus, the Seer!Harry, and Harry with the elven religion. I've only ever seen a religious Harry oneother time before, but it wasn't like this. This is really great, very detailed. I could almost believe it's a real religion, if it weren't for the fact that it's elvish. It's all blended together beautifully, even the obsessive Voldemort, (which you made seem creepy very well, I assume you were going for that. :) ) I also like the length of the story, usually I like a story as long as possible, if it's good. Some author's take too long to get to certain parts, too much suspense, no action, etc. But you've really done well I think. Anyway, sorry for blathering. Great fic, Cheers.

OMG i loved this its one of the best i have ever read i'm just sad it took this long to find it as i have been reading hp fan fiction for a long time but i am glad i found it.