i like the story you have going very nice!

This is so good and great. It's so vivd and I enjoy the storyline, regardless of POV hopping. Keep up the good work

* yay!! i love this story!! well, i don't know about you all, but i knew that jou wouldn't die :O dekinut-chan loves him too much =3 your art is aweosme too :D keep up the good work, and post soon ok?? *

I liked this story a lot, I even added it to my favorites list. And I must say it would be escpecially interesting to see Seto's reaction if he found out why Jou got shot. :)

T.T Wow, this story is great. It's dramatic, sarcastic, and cute at the same time. Good job.

pls continue...!

JOU! is jou going to die?? no!

aww.. they miss each other...

lol seto bought the store.. the hell.. XD

that was a sweet chapter.. i didn't expect it to have a continuation tho..

hehe yay for jou! If I were tht nurse i'd be like "WOO GO GO GO HOORAY FOR HOT YAOI!"

Hahaha, well everyone could see that Jou was in good condition xD Nice job ^^

I'm glad that Jounochi will be okay. Now fix the relationship between him and Seto. I mean they belong together. Update soon.

continue pls!! i want more! MORE!

wow..heavy... this is great man... A life changing story I've ever read in my entire goddamn life...