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Reviews for: The Long Haul
Dr. Colleen
2006-11-27 . chapter 1
"And together you chorus,I hate that stuff."
Ok...I'm not sure if I have a favourite...because I love this one too.
Cheers,
Colleen
Serigala
2006-09-17 . chapter 1
Aw. That is sweet. I like the ending; that both Greg and Nick's Mom have something in common by hating Nick's favourite dish. :D

Plus, I like what you added in the brackets. Make it even cute. =3
jynx
2006-06-05 . chapter 1
mac-cheese in a box is toxic. home-made all the way!11
SarcasmIsMe
2006-06-03 . chapter 1
again, that was too cute!!
dragon baby 14
2006-06-01 . chapter 1
it was really cute... one bit of info though:
prose is what you write normally
poetry is what you wrote this story in.
you might want to say "written in verse"

:)

i like all your stories. fabulous. not a couple i would have put together, but i like it...
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