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| ViolotQ 2007-12-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseis there gonna b anything else, may i ask? |
| Kaira-chan15 2007-12-02 ch 5,  | abuseThat's a pretty kool move: Toa could now make impromptu statues of whomever he was going against. Man a cliffhanger! Please update soon! ^_^ |
| Kaira-chan15 2007-12-02 ch 4, | abuseUgh, Mai would have to get married to Admiral Zhao instead? EW! I'm glad he died before then. I liked the last line. Great job, can't read to read more! :D |
| Kaira-chan15 2007-12-02 ch 3, | abuseIt was a nice twist to have Sela kidnap Lee back. I can't wait to read what happens next! |
| Kaira-chan15 2007-12-02 ch 2, | abuseToa and Toa gasped, and Tao muttered, “He said ‘butt’!” Lol isn't that from Finding Nemo, or am I wrong? “What is this, the Baby Brigade?” Zuko and Azula were still wrestling, when Lee kicked the princess in the head. Zuko smirked, “A little underhanded but, I think I’ll let it slide.” Aww Mei has feelings for Zuko, doesn't she? ^_^ Nice chapter! |
| Kaira-chan15 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseLol Toa. How clean is clean for him? :P That's cute, Zuko carried Lee on his back. I liked these lines: “Fine. I Spy. I spy a little kid who needs to not annoy me.” ‘How long can I poke Kuri before she retaliates?' Kuri is a pretty name. ^_^ I like how understanding Gansu was. Nice chapter! |
| Ma.anda 2007-09-30 ch 5, | abuseAa! What's going to happen next i wonder. may i hope for some zoku mai pairing? Manda |
| Salt Water Blues 2007-04-10 ch 5, | abuseYay! Updates, with Mai/Zuko! Cannot express happiness with keyboard so will substitute it with this: :) |
| Lilly 2007-04-01 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis story is very VERY good please update it. Love the idea with Mai. Is that what held her back from killing Zuko last chapter? |
| TheSummoningDark 2007-01-30 ch 4, | abuseBrilliant! *waits patiently for updates* ... *waits impatiently for updates* ... *twitches* UPDATE! Peace out ~TSD |
| Salt Water Blues 2006-10-17 ch 4, | abuseLove this storry so much! Please, I'm begging you Maiko, Maiko (I'm obessed with this pairing)! |
| Lonewolf26 2006-08-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseZhao? EW! excuse me... *runs to bathroom and throws up* sorry bout that *wipes mouth* :) |
| FireChildSlytherin5 2006-07-30 ch 4, | abuseGood chapter. I hope Mia would find Zuko, guessing she still loves him and he to her (?) Hope so, I'm tired of Zutara. update soon! |
| FireChildSlytherin5 2006-06-29 ch 3, | abuseThats okay, she belives ALL Fire benders are evil. Come to think of it, why don't people hate the Avatar? He (or she) could bend fire, everyone loaths fire benders and the Avatar is like 1/4 fire bender... Anyway, good chapter, UPDATE SOON! |
| firebendergirl 2006-06-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love your stories about Zuko' little group, and I have been waiting to read another chapter. Keep up the awesome work, and maybe make longer chapters. |