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| fatalquirks 2007-12-25 ch 13, | abuseWonderful! I loved the story, and I was very pleased with the ending. :) Also, I liked how you had the characters speak the same way. Sometimes people leave out the whole witty banter part. lol. |
| people-alwayz-leave 2007-07-25 ch 13, | abuseAw... That's all that can be said. This was true to character, which I liked. I like it alot, it was really good : )*s |
| fluffykogome 2007-03-23 ch 13, | abusePLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| Alenor 2006-07-14 ch 13, | abuseheya, this story was great. although i can't believe paris did that to them!! cya later ~ Alenor. |
| princetongirl 2006-07-02 ch 13, | abuseloved it update soon |
| KeitaWolf 2006-06-30 ch 13, | abuseI freaking loved this!! Effing amazing!~ Start that Sequal soon! |
| RoryLogan4ever 2006-06-29 ch 13, | abusedefinatly make a sequel but i dont think you should add lyrics |
| mrmp 2006-06-29 ch 13, | abuseLOL MOVE THAT BUS! Great job, can't wait for the sequel! |
| stefi690 2006-06-29 ch 13, | abusethat was a really great story! i loved all of the drama with Paris. can't wait for the sequel. |
| just hidden 2006-06-29 ch 13, | abuse“God no! You’re stuck with me buddy.”“Grandma and Grandpa bought me a bus? That’s just weird.”“You just wanna drive my car.” aw. so adorable. everyone in their place. even jess dropping out before graduation. luke and lorelai. aw. and then of course there's the troryness. can't forget that. amazing job. |
| LoVe23 2006-06-29 ch 13, | abuseOH wow! I was waiting for this chapter! I loved it, and I really loved this story...if you're able to find the songs that will fit your chapters as well as you did for this story, then do it...but I don't think it makes the story better...I loved this...thank you so much for writing it! :) |
| Joise 2006-06-29 ch 13, | abuseI loved the ending. Last chapter was a little scary how Loreali just jumped to the pregnant conclusion without getting actual proof. I really enjoyed this story, can't wait for the sequel. |
| Ravenscheer23 2006-06-29 ch 13, | abuseI cried SO much at the end!! sad tears when he left, happy tears when he came back! |
| FairyGirl03 2006-06-29 ch 13, | abuseThe last chapter was a little weird but i liked this one. I loved the ending, it was great! Loved the story. . . thanks for writing it! Kelli |
| melako17 2006-06-29 ch 13, | abusei love it. my favorite part of this chapter. |