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TouGod
2009-11-09 . chapter 16
Very good story, though there were a couple of times where I was banging my head against a wall in frustration at how seemingly random you had things going for a while.

Anyway, good story and I particularly like how you dealt with Nabiki. Looking forward to you finishing up this story.
Sean Malloy-1
2009-11-06 . chapter 16
Very good job on the new chapter(s), I'm hoping that you'll be adding more soon.

-At the end, it might have been funnier if Genma had said "D’oh.” and Felicia ask "Who are you, Homer Simpson?"
Prustan
2009-11-03 . chapter 16
Interesting story. Just one little question - back in chap 12, why didn't Genma tell Nodoka that honour had not been restored, as 5 young men had been killed and their families falsely believed Ranma of having killed them?
Darthme1011
2009-10-24 . chapter 16
finally caught up great chapter
wicked Ranma
2009-08-30 . chapter 16
I LOVE your storie very much i look forward to more chapters,I seen alot of crossovers before that are just plain crasy and make no sense .But your story makes sense and is greatly done short and sweet I LOVE THE STORY PERIOD
WR
Hiryo
2009-08-25 . chapter 16
Thanks for updating this fine story!
Jimbobob5536
2009-08-21 . chapter 16
Definitely a very good story. Really looking forward to the next update, whenever you get around to it. In the mean time I'll read A Legend Reborn.
DarkMaster1989
2009-08-18 . chapter 16
Arguably one of the best Ranma fanfics out there, if a little dark in the beginning. But I really can't wait to see the NWC get their's. Maybe one or two will be sent to Ryker's...

Yours truly,
DarkMaster1989
Charles L Flowers
2009-08-15 . chapter 16
Ifound your story very inertaining. It heald my intrest thrue the whole thing . Looking fowurd to more. harles
Wrin
2009-08-14 . chapter 16
I will say this. Very seldom does a fanfiction of any sort keep me up until 6:30 in the morning to finish it. This one did, despite my initial misgivings about the crossover material. I applaud your performance good author. Please forgive any sleepless nonsense this message may contain.
god of stuff
2009-08-02 . chapter 16
Good chapter and I find Nabiki's punishment rather fitting and scary as i could think of. The only problem I have is that everyone seems to talk about their revenge way to much. Also kudos for Kodachi. I didn't see that coming until it stabbed me in the back
Mika the Raven
2009-07-29 . chapter 16
Seriously how many times do you have to have characters describe "in DETAIL" how glorious their revenge is? This chapter almost made me want to write this story off as a lost cause. Really man, you have got to work on your inter-character dialogue.
Rogue7
2009-07-19 . chapter 16
Congratulations on the addition to the family :)

Another fantastic chapter, I do hope they can warn Ranma in time...
bsmitty
2009-07-17 . chapter 16
Im a little miffed that Ranma did not recieve a part in this chapter, but it was enjoyable nonetheless. Please continue.
masakiyangyi
2009-07-16 . chapter 16
It look's like the wreaking crew finally has a supervillion,nice way to bring someone who is like poisonivy into the marvelverse.
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