Great story! I especially like how Draco changed.

I really like Alice. But I can't help but think about Alice in the Twilight Saga.

Great!

Oh, good, I guess, but it's mostly sad.

this was a great story. i like how voldemort was defeated so soon it never really made since that dumbledore waited so long to start looking for and destorying the horcruxes in the books

Just finished this. Excellent job. Hope the rest of what you are working on (EX: The Time Meddlers) come out just as good.

hi.
i loved this story as well!
i was right!!
all your stories are great.
i am adding you to my favurite authors list!

I always appreciate stories that let the kids be kids and the adults be responsible and intelligent. The style was dry, but the story itself was great. Thanks for sharing!

great piece of work

thanks for the entertainment.

You know, this is quite an interesting concept, hm... Nice job

Cute story! I felt like you never explained a couple of things -- why Voldemort suddenly attacked the Potters when Harry was five, and also why Dumbledore thought of Horcruxes early. But OTOH, there's no great reason why Rowling delays the whole Horcrux business SO long, especially after CoS. Nice touch with Alice and Neville -- they're not written about enough.

I was expecting to see some sort of Super Harry in this story once he started training. I am glad to see that was not the case. It was a very good, if not excellent, story. Thanks for sharing.

hey, the storys good.
If you are interested the English term for kindergarden is reception.

i love it!

even though I knew this had to happen... poor harry