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vampyfreak
2009-04-20 . chapter 1
Poor Al, great fic
sparkyfma2000
2006-06-18 . chapter 1
*sniffles* that is so sad! Poor Alphonse! You actually should continue this. Oh and thanks for the review on my story HOW. There was a little problem that I had to fix, so I had to delete the story and re-add it so I lost your review, but I save ALL reviews in my e-mail. Anyways...thanks and awesome story. Really consider on continueing this. Could it be possible Alphonse is jealous? And what happens when Edward returns?

physcosquirrel
Synthetique
2006-06-11 . chapter 1
You reviewed my fic, so I review yours! [insert cliche line concerning equiva;ent exchange here]

I really liked this. It's wonderfully written and it really does seem like something that would happen, too. Afterall, Edward _was_ always in the limelight...
Alphonse needs more love ;_; Nobody deserves to feel like he does in this.

D: This feels like an insanely inadequate review for how much I loved this. I just don't seem to be very good with expressing myself today. Forgive me u_u;
Lea Cat
2006-06-01 . chapter 1
(Nice long whistle)

Wow. You know, this is nice.

I know the reason Al wears the same outfit as Ed is that he's trying to get closer to Ed in a spiritual sense, but...this is nice.

I like the way you make Al doubt himself. Oh, the pains of living up to your older sibling...
Slaughtered.Wings
2006-06-01 . chapter 1
Very sad when I think of Al's pov. Nice job!
Hotomi
2006-06-01 . chapter 1
Hey this was really great. I pictured each part of it perfectly. Is it a one-shot only?? (I guess it is...but I wished contrary)
JChrys
2006-06-01 . chapter 1
Well written - I could really picture Al and Roy reacting the way they do. And could really understand Al acting the way he does at the end.
Atari Atagashi-Chan
2006-06-01 . chapter 1
Omg... that was so sad... *sniff* Poor Al... Man! I wish there was another chapter to this... It was REALLY good!! I mean, REALLY good!! I loved it! You have real talent! Nice job in wording!

From, Your overly obsessive Kakashi/Ryuichi/Satoshi loving fangirlish reviewer from the wolf's den and Orochimaru's tree, ~Atari~
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