Oh my bad feeling is intensiving! They're running round with ... oh bugger ... Poor Eric, for some reason I realy feel for him. He keeps trying to get the others to wake up and smell the coffee and it just isn't happening.

Hooked and waiting for the next chapter!

Sorry it's taken so long to review this chapter.

You have a way of making the reader not want to stop reading and unfortuatly the whole story isn't here yet! I was suprised to find my self at the end of the chapter and was looking for more!

I have a bad feeling about what will befall our young heroes and I'm hoping that Eric is wrong about what befalls them.

Looking forward to your next update

Lovely beginning. The RoR were beautiful!

I have the feeling Venger is about to get himself in a sticky situation, and SD is gonna be all over it with "I told you so's."

:D

Great start, Sealgirl! You've got me really intrigued with the whole Ur thing (how is that pronounced, btw? Yer, Your or something else entirely?) and your characterisations are bang on. Love the way you write Venger, too. It's nice to get a good look at his thought process. Shadow Demon's getting a bit big for his boots...I like it. Looking forward to see where you go with this. :-)

Yay! This sounds interesting, and an intriguing start. Good going, Sealgirl.

Great first chapter.

Looking forward to the rest.